"She’s more

Wounded than I ever was"

There's a certain sadness to this piece, I liked the way you presented love as strong, obscure yet and does not conquer all.

Short and right to the point, well done )

fleur

This was lovely and I'm not sure why but it made me want to cry-I suppose it's because I'm rather emotional. This was simple and wholesome and just so true . . .

LMQ

What indeed. It's simple, and still so very good. I love it.

all around it's a good poem. only one thing. you seemed to end your stanzas at random points, maybe you could fix that so the flow will be better?