|Reviews for More For Her|
| wo bu ai ni le 8/20/08 . chapter 1
Wounded than I ever was"
There's a certain sadness to this piece, I liked the way you presented love as strong, obscure yet and does not conquer all.
Short and right to the point, well done )
| Teva'ni-Britagne 8/3/08 . chapter 1
This was lovely and I'm not sure why but it made me want to cry-I suppose it's because I'm rather emotional. This was simple and wholesome and just so true . . .
| ode to a nightingale 7/27/08 . chapter 1
What indeed. It's simple, and still so very good. I love it.
| fatbird33 7/9/08 . chapter 1
all around it's a good poem. only one thing. you seemed to end your stanzas at random points, maybe you could fix that so the flow will be better?