This absolutely spoke to my soul. It's honestly like you could have ripped this out of my head, linked it together nicely, and posted it. Thank you so much.

I love this short fic...it sorta reminded me of a story i wrote awhile back because I also used the subject 'you' to talk to. It is a double-edged technique that's why we don't see fics like that often. However, i believe you made a right choice to use 'you' in this kind of story. It made this story seem more interesting as well as personal. All in all, a job well done. ^^