Aah! Way to drop the bomb, mom. UPDATE SOON! Loved it.

keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Ahh...I recall you emailing me this chapter d:D Let's see what changes have occured...

*GASP!* No, not cooking?!

I wanna be Ms. Norton's daughter! D; It seems like so much fun!

Hehehe I see that Gilly-Bean *shut up, I'm too used to the stupid Practical Magic movie where that's Gillian's nickname* and Kaylee are still two different sides of yourself, Melly dearest d:)

No, not ELARDO?! D:

dxD! Wow, her attention span IS short!

You are most DEFINITELY not talking about Arroyo if there aren't that many Asian guys at the school dxD

HAHA! And THERE'S the reason Gilly-Bean is definitely YOU d:P Bumbling fool around the opposite sex. dxD Lol jk jk I lava you Melly d:D *whimpers* Don't hurt me!*

Don't worry. Most of us don't have luck with guys. We either dunno how to talk to them or get stuck and somehow STAY stuck to the worst of them d:P

How To Lose A Guy in 10 Days is a cute movie (:

I believe the quote you're looking for is..."fuel to the fire." d:P

First and only editor moment:
"When I got home, however, Mom’s Highlander was already in the driveway and I thought something was wrong since she never came home early from work."
Run on sentence. Try, "When I got home, however, Mom’s Highlander was already in the driveway. I immediately thought something was wrong, because Mom never came home early from work." For effect, italicize "never".

Okay, I lie, the last sentence too.
"I ran into the house and Mom was sitting on the couch, when she turned around and saw me, her first words were, “I got engaged!”"
Try,
"I ran into the house and saw Mom sitting on the couch. She must have heard me because she turned around to look at me. As soon as she caught sight of me, her first words were, "I got engaged!""
Just a suggestion. It makes it a little more dramatic d:)

wow this is very interesting! but i can't wait for the later chapters with the hott guys. please post soon!

looks interesting. Please write more soon?