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kittyluvr1 2008-09-03 ch 40,	abuseGood chapter with Michael taking her to the doctor who tells her that she's malnourished.
Crimson Azure 2008-08-31 ch 40,	abuse"Kind of right." Finally! Now she's seeing the light. I liked this chapter. For me, it showed progress for Madeline's health and for Madeline's and Michaels relationship. Great work, can't wait for more.
James-St-James 2008-08-30 ch 40,	abuseI WAS STARTING TO MISS YOU! It's, of course, amazing, as usual. I like the closeness that seems to be developing between Madeline and Michael. I also like how she acts with Ben, very sarcastic, very apathetic. It fits her well. I hope you find a lot more time to write. I've been dying without this.
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 39,	abuse"Michael & Madeline. M&M." OMG! I said this in another review! It's like some kind of wierd, psychic thing. OR it could just be a coincidence. Her bruises make me cringe & Ben is a jerk. He can suck it. Keep going & I hope everything is amazing on your end! xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 38,	abuseI love his determination. It's made of steel. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 37,	abuseAh, he puts his rare braiding skills to good use again! (: The drama! The tension! It's making me shift in my seat. She's a hot mess. Tell me tell me she'll be all better in the end. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 36,	abuseFighting in a laundromat. Men.! The French is sweet. & if you want to write your next story in it, you should def. do it. I won't be able to read it, though. I've taken Italian for 4 years, so that'd be sweet. I've never read any poems in Italian before. You do what you want! YAY for Michael! After he was done, he should been like, "WHO'S YO DADDY!?" xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 35,	abuseI love the Rockefeller. I never went ice skating there, but my brother did. But woah, Aaron needs a chill pill & a drink. He's flipping out for no reason. Michael to the rescue! xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 34,	abuseGORDON! Where is he? ): Michael & Madeline. M&M. I just realized that! Okay, this is really random, but have you ever watched America's Most Smartest Model? It was an old reality show. But anyways, there's a fridge that gets locked every morning & the contestants have to find the answer to the question posted on it before it's unlocked. So this 1 question was some math problem. This one male model was eating a banana at the time & he didn't have any paper, so he used the banana peel as paper to try to solve the math problem! LOL! I'll never forget that. I loved him. The part with the orange peel & pen made me remember that. Sorry. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 33,	abuseTRISTAN & ISOLDE!! I loved that movie! I don't listen to opera, really. My Italian teacher played it so many times last year. It sounded nice, but I couldn't understand what they were saying. Maybe because it was in Italian. I LOVE IKEA! I lovelovelove that place. LOL. I make a point to sniff all the candles there, as I've admitted on my profile. (: The painting of the couch was genius! I've wanted to do something like to so badly to the walls in my room, but my mom would kick me out. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 32,	abuseoh wow! that was so smart! if it hadn't been for your note, i def. wouldn't have gotten it. haha. i'm so jealous that you speak french! you should write it in french if you want. idk it, but i'm sure there are some french-speakers out there that would enjoy this! xoxo p.s. french. lol, i said french so many times in this review! french. sorry, still late. well, it's still around 10:30PM. lol. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 31,	abuseLOL! I love the BABE! part on the butt. I hate that crap. Chrissie BLABBED! JK. Michael needed to know what was going on, def. He needs those little sneaky cameras around like I said in another review. To monitor her. ...& other stuff. (nudge) y'know. y'know. LOL, I'M JK! it's late & i'm delusional. actually, it's only like 10:30PM. i'm just trying to brighten things up! poor poor madeline. i can't wait till the end where everything is solved. it IS a happy ending, right? i'll cry if it isn't. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 30,	abuseno way he feel asleep in front of her door! he probably went home & came back early to fake it. i would do that. LOL, i'm just kidding. michael's some serious kid. but i would still do that & then i'd be like, "look! i slept in the damn snow for you! ...this guarantees a diamond necklace!" back to the story. madeline needs a good smack in the face to wake her up & then a hug afterwards because it's not nice to smack people. ): speaking of conspiracy, one of my bff's teachers was always complaining about conspiracies. paranoid, much? lucky for me, i have her this year... ): back to the story again. LOVING IT! xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 29,	abuseaw. ): why does this happen! i am not happy. ): it's still good, though. just saddening. xoxo
pixiepoptartz 2008-08-26 ch 28,	abuse"I was about to check in the cupboard under the sink where I doubted he could fit..." LOL! Aw, he left her be for once. He should install some tiny cameras around her house to make sure she eats properly. But then again...that might be kinda creepy. LOL.

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