Very cute. I loved the intgreation of gamer lingo and, though I won't say that I was exactly surprised by the ending, I had to read all the way through. Legitly, I would not stop reading until I finished. Very sweet, and with well developed characters.

Just a note: I don't exactly get why Jacey yells "owned" at the end, or at what point she entered the scene.

:) Liked it!

Haha, this was childlike :P

I liked it :D

I absolutely LOVED the ending line with Jacey! Haha...

- Rebekah

I LOVE YOU! No really. in a platonic way though.

ahah, your style of writing is awesome.

Ri

haha, i did not know pwned, i think i will start using it asap.

Aww! So sweet.

Okay, I absolutely love how dorky they both were. Because it was, like, really charming and sort of different from all the other best friend stories out there, where he's Mr. Popularity and she's... um, Ms. Brilliant-Snarky-Person. Yeah. And she's nice enough to think that Jacey is too sweet to send coy glances at her. I liked that, too.

And that Tanner actually did all of it because he liked her. Ah! The whole thing was just really, incredibly sweet.

Love this fic. Love the relationship between them two.) Made me smile, this fic!)

I LOVE this story! Adorable :) Even though I thought Tanner's logic about dating Jacey was skewed, but oh well...he is a boy, after all :P Nice job.

Aww ;D Cute story.

I almost cried at the beginning LOL when Tanner told Danni that they had to break their friendship :(

You portrayed Danni's emotions beautifully, from sad, to pissed, to happy, etc. And Tanner too :)

Great piece of writing! Write more soon? :D

bel

loved it

CUTE!(:

I'm so glad I got to read this. Truly awesome.

This story is so cute! I loved it :)

Pwned.

I won't lie, I use 'pwn' all the time. And Roflcopter. And N00b. And other such gaming lingo.

-is a n00b-

But frealz beb, this was awesome!

:D