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| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this idea, just the title might need to be changed (in my openion) because I spent the entire time waiting for the father character to come in. But I did really like the idea and the ending! If you changed the title to something that didn't lead the reader to think the story was all about the dad, I would gladly add this story to my C2! Cool idea! Write on! Pen.Dragon |