AH! Fantastic. I loved it so much, my dearest alpha! At the moment, though, I am puzzled with Joshua. What's going on there? I suppose we will read and find out!

Very funny at parts but the characters and situations can seem kinda flat at times so if you can work on that it would be really good

I am incredibly nice aren't I? haha.


I really really really like this chapter! I'm am very excited to see where the story goes. I liked the last section very much. I have this amazing fascination with your use of adjectives. I think you really know how to voice what you're trying to say. You paint very vivid images of your characters and places. The people and places you write about are all very perceivable and I like that about your writing.

*heart*

I love it! Still love it! I know you are going to do GREAT things with this story, I can sense it. I really can't wait for you to update again! I just know there's going to be some awkwardness with her and her angel man. But what? Hm...

Cute.

Oh I love it! Absolutely adore it! I think it rocks and nobody is a better writer than you! Don't back sass me either! I'm right and I can't wait for the upcomingness of the next chapters/installments!