Good piece, very true. There are some points in life when we're like, god I just want to sleep.

Keep it up :)

Faith

I really like this poem. Interesting form, and I liked the fact that the poem was centered and not left aligned. I notice you don;t use any capitalization, and I find that a very unique and attractive style to use. Good work!

You know, I can totally relate. And that's not to say I'm dissatisfied with my love life at all, or even that I love my man any less, but some nights it's just like... "Can't we just PLEASE go to sleep?" I'm sure at some point every woman can relate at some level...

Or maybe that's just me.

Either way, it's lovely.

L. Kantenseter