this was rather interesting. is there going to be an update soon? *hinthint*

Hiya!
To quote a much loved Disney movie "We've met before."
I'm stalking you!
O.O
No, really, I am. I know everything!
...Alright, I just love your writing.

This style is something I've never seen before, but that I definitely like. I've had the thought, once or twice, to write a story through letters, but only on letter per chapter, nothing to this extent. I can't wait to see where this goes, and will read the other story shortly.

I'd like to see what one of your Satoshi/Takeshi fics would be like written in this style. With Satoshi as a note taker and Takeshi as a reporter, it's possible.

Your ever faithful fan (stalker),

Yoko-sempai (AKA: Shadow)

SOMEONE ELSE PLAYS THE DICTIONARY GAME!?
I was not aware!
: D
It's all I do in Creative Writing.
You totally get a brownie point.

I'd love to see another chapter of this, it's off to a great start!

this is an interesting beginning. if you ever decide to keep writing it, id love to come read more of it.

I like it =) It's funny, and I love this style of describing an entire day just by notes that are taken. In your other fic, I enjoyed that more than the B.R.A.I.N.'a agents' notes. But that may be just me.
Anyway, I would love to see 'Sex in words' continued, or at least, y'know, finished. ^_^

Well,

While that was mildly weird, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

It was interesting. Lol. And definately unique. Which is a good thing!

Good stuff. You have a cool writing technique!

I did get a little confused sometimes though.

Byee!

I like it so much, please update and make jake the seme, please. xoxoxoxo. or senseless pornography all around like in the other story that you wrote and was written this way. xo paputsza xo

Ah, didn't show up myspace . com/harveyquinn (in case you'd like to get in contact)

I stumbled on this by accident while google searching my name... Very weird...

On topic:

I actually thought this was a clever and funny read, this isn't so much of a review, but more of a compliment to your ability as a writer. I don't want to think too much about constructive criticism right now; I'm at work and it'd be a long and labourious process as from a breif skim, it's good.


Oh and

/harveyquinn


:)

Haha, I'm liking Harvey's character. Really. And Jake, trouble? Hm... I'm excited to see where this is going, if it goes anywhere. x_x *waits impatiently for another update to this and the other story that I can't remember the name of*

Just testing something out.

Interesting first chapter, you, and congrats on actually getting reviews!

Cheers -YOU

Yes, this is interesting and I want to know what's going to happen. Tell me Harvey isn't going to discover that he's in love with his best friend after all.

i love your letter-fics. they complete my life. if i ever end up in the hospital YOUR STORIES WILL BE MY LIFE-LINE.

ahem. but no, seriously, i can't wait to see "sex in words" updated. xD or this one, for that matter. -jumps around-

...I am in love with this. I don't even know where to begin. Had it not been 2:50am, therefore a risk of waking up my parents, I would've been laughing hysterically out loud. As it was, I had to keep the laughs in. My stomach muscles have probably grown a great deal. Ah, I love everything about this. The notes, the characters, the little "School War" spiel...everything. Seriously. I can't wait for more. XD

Loved it :) And I can´t wait for Sex in Words~ I hope you continue this one!! :DD