hahhahaa thats funny

This was so great! It was truly amusing and amazing :D I wish it would continue though. I would love to see what happens to them further on :P Anyways, amazing story!

Nice! :)

cute story and funny too :) keep up the good work

Bahaha, as a College fresher this year I can totally relate to this.. it's so easy to stalk and lust after randoms on campus. I really liked this one-shot though, in my opinion one-shots are far superior than 30 chaptered stories as they get a bit boring and dull to read half-way through it.. but yeah, the length was good, short and sweet.

aww! so cute! really liked this one shot. too sweet xD

Love it

Good job! It made me smile while I was procrastinating on studying for my midterm tomorrow.
:)

This was so much fun to read! I loved the plot, and the entire twist at the end killed me...I enjoyed it so much! You really did an awesome job. :)

cute^_^
loved it~
i so enjoyed reading ti>.

Quite funny!

For some reason, I skipped the part where you explained that Sketchy Brent wasn't his real name, and I was just like, "who would name their child sketchy??" Haha, but I loved that you called him that! And I love this story.

What a sugary, sweet one-shot! I enjoyed it immensely!

Haha, fantastic story!
xx

I love love love the way she calls him sketchy brent throughout the story. it seems SO MUCH like a code name my friends and I would give! that made it really realistic for me :) other than that, it was also very sweet. loved the way their relationship developed, and the way he turned out to be smart, for a slacker.

I especially enjoyed the ending, I would have to admit. it was so funny! I was thinking that maybe both of them had bets going, but I wasn't quite sure :)

anyway, well done. I'd say it's a good length for a oneshot. I mean, it's a bit long, but it works. I wouldn't split it up, but it's your call.

take care!