Interesting. I like the cliff-hanger. Good job! I found one thing. Not really anything important though. Just nitpicking. Did I use the word right?

I don’t even think you know why I don’t except your apologies. I think you mean accept instead of except.

Still good job! I like what I've read so far!

Pretty good 2nd chapter! One thing though, she wasd at the hospital and then all of a sudden at her house? Hmm...

Other than that little thing this story is comming along nicely. I'll read more when I have some time. Good job!

This was pretty good. I am curious of what happened. I do have two suggestions though.

1. I'd shorten the part of her fighting him. That part is too long and it's just rambling.
2. I'd take out the part where he carried her. I doubt that someone who has never seen you would just pick you up and carry you inside. Too unrealistic.

Other than those two parts, this was really good! I think I'll move on to the next chapter...

hi. i have a question. is this story over? because it says complete and idk if its over or not. i hope not bc im still confused. are u going to write a sequel?

uh interesting:D I was sort of relieved when I saw you also posted chapter 7;) hehe I just thought in chapter 6 WTF! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE;D. hehe. this story is getting very interesting. I hope you will keep on.:D.

Hmm...Okay. I'm so confused now. I'm not even going to try and assume what's going on. All I ask is that you update soon! So that I can organize all the things that are going on in this story and figure out what the hell is REALLY going on. Lol.
With that, HURRY UP! (But thank you for this chapter). ;)

WHAT? why didnt he stop? i would of been pissedd at that.. but then again upset too.

uh. I sense trouble ahead;D. hehe. great job.:) I hope you'll update soon.:).

Dum dum dum...Silly Alex, causing trouble. ;)
Update fasteer!

hey:D. of course I remember.:) and of course I read your newest work. A different way of writting. Good and I really want to know more;D. hehe so you better continue. You should really try to write longer chapters. :). so please continue.:).

this definetly is good in making me want to know more. interesting, mysterious air in this chapter.

good job and update soon!

-kanders

Sorry, tried to post a review before but I'm not sure what happened there =/
Anyway, I'm intrigued by this, it's really well-written, and draws a reader in, keep it up!

Oh, I'm intrigued =)

Hi! So I'm reading this as I go along, and I must say; great job! One thing I noticed this in the begining though:

The reason as to why I was there wasn’t completely clear. However, there was one feeling that was made clear

:You repeated 'clear' so to keep it from becoming redundant I suggest you fill in one of the 'clear's with another word, like 'obvious' or somthing like that. I suggest a thesarus (i keep mine close by at all times :) they are great life-savers for finding new words. :)

I turned around to look and see their face. Again, I knew this person yet his face was unrecognizable, too.

again, you repeated 'face' here. :)

Nice job at capturing your characters emotions. I totaly get that shes scared...guilty...and maybe a little angry at herself. Al-in-all, a wonderful job.

Can't wait to read the rest!

Ciao!

~nicola~

Interesting. I want to see where this goes. Keep up the good work!