"A stolen kiss traded,/For another broken heart." I really thought those two lines were a great description.

"For many sleepless nights,/For many tear filled nights." those two lines sounded a bit repetitive.

I like the piece, especially the ending had a sort of desperate quality to it. Definitely very relateable.

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Great job at expressing your feelings. Nice work. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

Same thing again I take it? For starters, great poem. Nice to see you writing again. Maybe you should hope for friendship, and maybe that IS what he is trying to offer. Heh, take it from me though, backtracking/downgrading hope can be hard.

so i read it, and i was like cool. sounds like fun. great.
and then i read someones review that mentioned trevor.
i am now im in deep confusion. have i lost it?!?

Trevor? Ah well it doesn't matter that much. I'm just excited that you wrote something!

I can tell you haven't written in a while, though, because you didn't have the same rhythm you usually do. "A seemingly true I Love You, / For many sleepless nights, / For many tear filled nights."