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| calendar girl 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseyou're amazing. |
| JuHi 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseoh...gosh...that was amazing...so funny...i loved it.kind of cute. i wish i had a stalker like that. kinda cute n jester sortss... um...hey i have written a one shot. please just lend me your ten minutes and read it. its my first time writing something. i would be highly obliged if you take out time...thnx |
| Nihilist Proxy 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseHilarious! It's short sweet and simple which really plays on the one sidedness of the Stalker and his/her "Obscence Object of Desire". Just one question though: I noticed that this is Chapter 1, if there is more are you only going to do Stalker's and Celebrities? Or is the "victim" aspect free range? It would probably have more flavor if you continued this series or story with everyday people that way it becomes a bit more intrapersonal to the reader as though "we" as readers could be next or possibly we ARE the stalkers. But great story again ^.^ [Nih Proxy] |