you make me hate myself.
because you write so well.
because your characters are so kickass
and because
I DONT HAVE GAY FRIENDS LIKE THAT.

YOUR AMAZING.
DONT EVER CHANGE :D

That was absolutely resolutely magnificently wonderful. I loved your descriptions of them especially as little boys. I just wished you wrote more about gwen because you only mentioned her once. And you keep mixing Ashton and Aston. The first time you mentioned the names of ronnie and jesse's to be adopted kids ronnie named the boy Aston and the last two chapters kind of confuses this, but I like the nicknamed of them. Nice work :)

I really wonder what that song would sound let. The lyrics were brilliant! Thanks for another brilliant story you can probably tell now that I'm going through every story of yours, hehe it's like a marathon.

Beautifully bittersweet and I like how you wrote the last line. And since you asked so nicely, here is a review. But yes I think this is one of the best chapters of this story.

Beautiful *sniffle*

OMG

Wow, this story is so cute. I know i've said it a million times and shit, but holy FUCK it's cute!! and YAY! Ashie and Miah are totally perfect for each other! Just like Ronnie and Jess!

Aw! Ashton and Jeremiah have to totally be together. That's just the cutest thing in the world. =]
I've only ever seen cute little boys hug like that in family parties and stuff. Even then it's not as adorable. I wish I had a camera everytime it happened though. I hope if I ever have a son he'll be cute just like that! x3

AH! oh my god! so cute!! I just want to huggle them so tightly and squish their cutie pie rainbow guts out!! Ha ha. That violently loving. x3

Aww that was so cute! I'm like still crying. Haha.

*cries, taking a tissue from the box beside her*
oh my god! NO! So sad...

*squeal*
OMG! THAT'S SO CUTE!
HOORAY FOR RONNIE! He finally gots his boyfriend!
x3

Crying.
Blah.
So much for my fucking physics homework.
lkadmgdagba I can't even think. Amazing.

Stop writing stories that I adore.
I have homework.
It's so bad. XD

I actually cried while reading this story! You truley are a gifted person and I realy want to read more about Miah and Ashie! PLEASE! I'm sure a plot bunny will pop up in your mind one day and when it does go with it!