Amazing first sentence
and i dont even like vampire stories

"creep the living daylights out of you." Heh! If this is anything inspired by the Twilight series, that would be narmtastic!

Update soon!

Nice...very cool and creepy. I particularly like the way you chose to end it. I'm sure any fleshing out of this would make a very interesting read.

Wow. o.o I love it; really really. By the way, the only reason I read it was because of the Dhampir thing as your summary. x3 Err..not that, you know, it's bad but it caught my attention. ^.^