Oh wow, you need to write a sequel. Seriously, this is a piece of magic here. I was just giggling like a school girl on crack the whole time. You lil oneshots are so adorable. XD. I should get an account just to fav all of them. You are just genius and your writings just turn me into goo. Like this one, it's so fluffy. So, what's it take for a sequel? I will beg for it. It really is that good. Anyway, you keep it up! I will be looking forward to your other works.

Aww. :3 That was really cute. Cale and Drew I mean, not the repetitive yacking. And a very nice one shot if I may say so.
I also kind of loved your diction. I dunno why but I just sort of like the way you write. It's not so cliche. So thank you for the good read.

I love the characters in this- for being such a short story, by the end their personalities were so clear. This was adorable...

Oh, cute. At least something good came about because of the twice tasted hamburger.

haha this is excellent! really well written - i enjoyed the read, thanks! :)

oh Gods
so cute
so cute
more?
can I bribe you for a sequel?

Very nice. :D

Aw, cute. I love Cale. He's so adorable.

This is just plain sweet. Thanks for the smile. Fav'd for rereading the next time I need a cheer-up. :D

That was quite fabulous. I'm enjoying your characters although Cale's personality is a bit murky and Violet almost seems to be there only for the purpose of progressing the plot. Might wanna tweak her appearance in the story a bit.

Secondly, I'm quite positive that not eating meat for (I'm assuming here that Cale is 14-17) for about 10-13 years doesn't mean you'll throw your guts out when you finally do eat meat 10-13 years later. Just, you know, pointing that out. Find a better reason. Maybe Violet just made him eat something dreadful that she had cooked. Icky cooking can make you sick or throw up and it seems more realistic.

However, I do enjoy the whole idea of how they meet. Very original and your writing isn't half bad either. I would suggest toning down the semi-colon abuse since, you know, one isn't needed everywhere you stuck one. And this:

“Actually, the point was kind of that you’re not.” Drew couldn’t resist pointing out, and grinned at the look he received.

is a no-no. Drew stated in what he said that he was making a point, you don't need to restate it in the narrative. That's just repetitive which is in turn annoying.

I await the next chapter. :) (I was totally sad when I reached the end of this 'cause I thought there was more than one chapter and then there wasn't. Update~)

Okay, when the story ended I quite literally said, "Aw..." without realizing I was doing it. XD Cute story. The ending was hilarious.

This is so cute! I really love Drew he seems like a cool character. I hope for a sequel or something. Please *Puppy Eyes*

haha, cute. =] sorry it's short!

This is so cute! I love it~ You should totally update this!

Update Soon!

Cari Marie

I wanted to read a nice, cute and funny story before sleeping so I re-read that one and I still like it a lot (as great impression as the first one), so I re-review!
Thanks again for sharing Cale and Drew with us!