Very funny, very cute. And I agree with Drew . . . drinking water after I barf just makes me do it all over again.

Livi

This was really funny, and well written. I liked it very much. :)

Is there actually any possible response to this other than "Aw!"?

Very cute and well characterised for a short piece like this.

It's been a while since I read such a god story that made me laugh out loud. I was almost crying at the end (although it might be the sugar high, but I doubt it!) I really like the characters, in such a short span you make them likable and interesting. Great job. I would love to see more of about these two! The humor was jsut so good! _

Ici

Oh, so cute! However, I must question, "Are high schoolers usually that suave?" Drew's really confident for a high school kid.

D'aw, I have this mental image of the Black Dragon and his small human after reading your description of Drew and Cale, even though the personalities are completely different. XD

This is absolutely freaking FANTASTIC!

I LOVE IT!

It's adorable and I think it deserves a sequel where Drew meets up with Cale on Thursday

FANTASTICALLY MARVELOUS.

o. fun new story! i kind of like the title, but i can understand if you're not crazy about it- sometimes it's hard to find the right one. i'm definitely intrigued by this. cale sounds adorable and shy [i sympathize with anyone who blushes that much] and drew sounds sweet and smokin' hot [i have a thing for dreads], so i'm looking forward to more! :)

That was simple, kind of cute (despite the throwing up _), original and quite the giggling material (easy to imagine too). Thanks for sharing it!

I'm happy to read more of your work and do want to see more of IABD but as long as you'll finish it one day, I don't mind the wait (can always reread it when "en manque").

Dreads!

Also: Cuteness! Cale is really lucky.

that is so cute!

I read this, scrolled up and immediately re-read it. ;

To further clarify-I thought the story was very good. You managed to give all three people defined personalties in a short amount of time and the description you worked in, well, I can pretty clearly picture Drew, working on Cale XD Fialogue was fun and funny and I loved the sarcasm (I'm a wit fan and you had quite a bit in here. Favorite lines would definitely be Voilet's, "..the part where I thought you were exaggerating" and Drew's, "Yeah, they sort of like it when the VP shows up").

All in all, great story. A good thing to come back with, I think! I noticed you put it down as complete, so I'm not going to ask for continuation; it had a great complete feel for teh one shot that it was. Wouldn't mind seeing another slice of their lives later on though, if you ever felt like it. D Thanks a lot for sharing.

(For titles, uh...all I can think of is "I found him in the-" but that...that might be too lame for you.)

Great start!

Title's not so bad. Actually, I think it's kind of good. I mean, you could have named it 'Bathroom Boyfriend' or something worse. Maybe 'Boyfriend Jamboree' so the initials would be BJ (which I hear is another name for the bathroom?). 'Lou Love'. "I Love Lou".

Maybe I should just stop there, because I can only see it going downhill from there.

I'm looking forward to more of this story, and more of your other stories, keep up the great work,

Qui