this is cute!
and it's really like Please Be Mine!

this is an awesome story update soon!
i really like it

Hey again! I really, really liked this chappie and was surprised and very, very happy about the length! I'm glad you're going to be obsessed with this story soon! It's seriously great! The only thing I didn't like was the large amount of dialog at the end. Maybe a little more description, or even just what they were having for dinner or something. But other than that this really was perfect! And AWW! The flashback was cutely freaking awesome and I LOVE Nick! He's soo sweet and cute! Unless you already have this planned (which I'm sure you do) I would LOVE for Lucky and Nick to get together! Well, I can't wait for another update! This was great! Thanks!

~StroodleDoodledFuhn/Gianna Kozel

sry da review iz late Catrina...I LOVE IT! This story iz awesome. I can't wait for the update. ttyl

aw! its so sweet! i love love LOVE it! lol
as always!

aww this so cute update soon :)

NICCEE! lol
Update soon!

im really getting addicted to this story!
i really didnt liked julian in the beginning of the chapter but at the end...i like him a little more...
but for now i really want luck and nick together haha
oh and the part w/ ''lucky charms'' really made me laugh:P
so update soon;)
ur doing such a great job on this one!:P
im so excited to read one of YOUR story like really something that's totally created by u w/ ur own characters and stuff:P
i luv u x

i think i read a story like this before but ehh idkk
but anyways good please.! update soon.!!

CATRINA! THIS IS SO GOOD!
JULIAN IS THE TYPE THAT YOU HATE TO LOVE AND NICK, WELL I JUST LOVE HIM!!
THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME! :)
~ANEELA

wow
long chapter
i love it
i sense nick julian fight
also you messed up
you said Denise instead of Jane

"They walked down and into the dining room where Denise and the boys’ father, Scott, was already seated."

seriously amazing.
loved it :]

awesome!

o..two brothers..interesting..
feel sorry for lucky her parents arent around..
update soon

Aw!
I want her to end up with Nick first and then Julian. Like, idk he changes.

Awesome update cant wait for more!