Dear stained blue,
Artists dont need to explain their work. That's why their artists

Dear Stained Blue,

It is what is what it is and it deserves itself.

"your essence on my teeth, like grinding cigarettes into an ash tray."

One of the most poetic lines I've read in a while. Nice work.

good. but I don't think it's about the illusion of darkness as much as it is about the taste of regurgitated love

this really captured my interest. It's well done and your imagery is great.

the only thing is that I don't share the same opinion about "silence" as you do. I find silence to be basically the exact opposite of most of what you described. but that's just me. lol.

yeah. anyway, excellent job on this.

I liked it, but it wasn't your best work. Still good though.
Faith

Beautiful--somewhat...completely! Deadly conversations--silhouette of your mother, emptiness--lingering sister of darkness--some of my favorite lines--but every line is staggering. I love it and will read it again and again!

McKinley

I like it. Keep it up :)
Faith

The description you used in this is beautiful. You really have a way with words.