 gulistanlik 2008-12-17 . chapter 1First of all, why is this rated M, there's really no mature content- at least to THAT level. Phew. =D
Anyway, I like how this story centered on something that you normally would not read about in other stories. A simple yet not so simple symbol. A rag doll. Dolls. That symbolises their friendship and eventually love for each other, their attachment.
Okay, I'm kinda sounding philosophical so I'll stop. Anyway, up top is why I favourited this. It may have mushy bits, but the writing before the mushy bits prepares you so that you don't find those bits too cliched, or too much. Thank you for writing and posting such a lovely fic and congratulations on a job well done!
gulistanlik |
 gothic lil princess 2008-07-22 . chapter 1 this was very sweet. you do romance beautifully! |
 sasha-hawkins 2008-07-20 . chapter 1wow, I really liked this one! I can sort of relate to it. Sort of. The ending didn't happen and we aren't really best friends. but it's all good! I really like your writing. :) |
 teehee love 2008-07-18 . chapter 1 this was so SWEET! I lOvEd the recording of her answering machine! Yeah! Lovely! |
 cherrystraw 2008-07-16 . chapter 1Oh wow...
that is SO good!
wicked awesome story! |
 x3life 2008-07-15 . chapter 1aw this is so cute! =) |
 The Bloody Sponge 2008-07-15 . chapter 1I only have one regret: that this is not longer.
Very 'cute' story. I liked and enjoyed the brief little candy. |
 xhianglian 2008-07-14 . chapter 1aw! that is the sweetest thing I have ever read! |
 NoieD 2008-07-13 . chapter 1I really liked this, but he REALLY didn't grovel enough. I didn't say why he turned her down, without any apparent intention of telling her until BEKA DUMPED HIM!, even though she already said she loved him! THAT super-bugged me. But I still love the story! |
 angel-i-effect 2008-07-12 . chapter 1 I never thought a one-shot could be so moving and make me cry. It's beautiful and heartfelt... and wow.
I loved it! |
 pceluvnchclte 2008-07-12 . chapter 1this. was. amazing!
do you have any idea how beautiful this story is? you made me laugh, cry, and scream.
& even though i knew that in the end they would get together, i still felt a little anxious. call me a sap, but i love stuff like this.
it was nice how jackson & elaine actually felt real. not just words on paper (err, computer screen), but real people. i really understood the struggles both of them went through to finally admit their feelings for each other.
thanks for such a nice read! i'm definitely adding this to my favorites. |
 Koki Enwai 2008-07-12 . chapter 1Very touching. I loved it from start to end; you really have quite the gift here.
Thanks for the great read!
- Koki |