beautifully written

I thought that this was written gorgeously. There was great imagery and even though I haven't read Equinox, you still left me with an impression that he was a complex character.

Great job.

ARGH! Fictionpress f*cked up my review! *cry*
New attempt:
This is real cool! I love Nathan!
Aaron is fine but Nathan is my favorite with all his issues and stuff! I love how you described him as something broken that needs to be fixed before it can hold the contents it needs. I hope that Nathan can be at least glued together if not repaired completely!
I wish Raina and him could have a normal and beautiful relationship after some years have passed and they're both ready for it! They belong together or actually I just want them together! XD
It's great how you mentioned Nathans dad since he never had an actual appearance although he's had quite an impact on Nathans life. I especially like this memory because it shows one of Nathans dearest (or so it seems) memories and how he wished it could always have been and how he himself wants to be. Does that make sense? O.o
Good job!!

This is real cool! I love Nathan!!

Your writing is... intense and so beautiful, so pretty (even if some parts are tragic)! I loved Equiinox (the original version) and I loved this piece too.

hiyee! =)) this was just lovely and tormenting to read! i wanted more of equinox all over again! hahah seriously, you need to make a sequel. i want more nathan pleasse? he is such an interesting character and you can't help but feel for him. i hope he finds God too as Raina did in Equinox. Just wished he'd be whole and happy again. -sobsob-

you paint very realistic thoughts/characters. is nathan based on someone you know in real life or did you just write him by imagination only? either way, you're an amazing writer!

Hey, it's been awhile! I tried searching for Banner Over Me and I got confused :( are you ever going to repost it?
Hmm well anyway. I liked this. Great imagery :] You should write more one-shots!
I've never seen a shark tooth before.. did you find any when you were at the beach?

O.o only TEN reviews? for such a wonderful piece of work? o.O I am AGHAST! ><

But yesh yesh yesh, that lack of review prompted me to write that this is truly truly a wonderful piece of art (for the lack of a better word). It is heartbreaking to see how Nathan thinks I daresay, and all the more painful if one has read Equinox. :) It's great great great great great! :D :D :D Looking forward to your works~ :D

ah! this is too amazing. i haven't been on lately so I haven't gotten a chance to check out stuff I usually check out. this was beautiful as usual! i love the way you describe nathan's father's accent. i also love the way you describe nathan's love for raina, and the water...AGH perfect as usual. so perfect, so pretty. loved it.

we'll chat soon!

This was nice to read...sort of bittersweet. I enjoyed it!

Myrtle Beach as in Myrtle Beach SC? I'm from there...:)

That was...heart wrenchingly beautiful. I've been secretly hoping for a sequel to Equinox for a long time, but I guess this is the closest I'll get, haha. Anyways, I deeply admire your writing and hope for more updates (soon?)

This was nice- nice to see Nathans POV on something. :)

I'm curious..will you be making a Sequel? Do Aaron and Raina stay together? Or do Nathan and Raina get back together?

very good. I loved seeing that little bit of his past. Excellent job. I hope you write more of these little one-shots. This was great :) Keep it up!
Faith

yay!! this was such a great addition to my favorite story!! nathan's story is heartbreaking and raw, i just want to hold him! anyways, i couldn't dish out enough praise to equinox, but i hope to read more of your work in the future!
xo ella

Aw!