hahah, oh jeez, that may have been one of the strangest endings i've ever read. And so much better for it :). Great story, the unique storytelling really made it stand out. Besides, these two are too adorable not to love :D.

This is completely adorable. I love, LOVE, the pillow fight in public. Perfect way to describe it.

This is so cleverly written! You're obviously well-versed as well, this is quite different from all those porny slash fics I've been seeing on this website lol. Good job!

The ending *is* kinda silly. But I like it! _ And overall too. It's amusing to read, for most part.

You my dear are a mad genius. Narnia and mythology allusions everywhere. Oh and all of your band references in Dandelion Clocks. Wonderful I say.

Aw! So fluffy...Literally!

Confused about one thing though. Is Steve Adam's friend or father?

"If he is to remain my best friend" "“You’re the worst father ever,” Adam snaps bitterly at me, throwing the burst pillowcase onto the ground."

Could you have been referencing to Daedalus?

This was cute. I also have a pillow fetish, but not of goose down ones. They make me itchy. O_o

OMG! My friend Chezzeh just told me to read this lol! It reminded her of two of our characters in a story we write. This was awesome and so fluffily adorable!

Gah! It's fabulous, and fluffy and cute. I'm definatly faving it

Chez

So strange, so cute. And who can sleep with just one pillow?

Livi

Oh man, I love you.

Love it, love it, LOVE IT! So fun, so witty, so ... just (sigh) loverly.

So much awesome material in here I am just going to point out a few of my favorites:

"He must know, I realize at last. If he is to remain my best friend - if I am to continue shaming myself by going with this ridiculous habit of his - then he *must* know."

"He reels from this goosy outbusrt, spluttering and coughing like a fox choking on its fowl lunch."

"And my last words are about nothing but *pillows*!"

"Little naked goslings in heaven, here I come ...

I duck."

"Bloody hell! Does he always do *that* to his pillows? Does he do other unmentionable things to them as well? Is that why his mum threw out all his old ones? Is that why they all ended up smelling so *bad*?"

Haha so amusing! Wonderful, wonderful oneshot. :)

Lol! This was HILARIOUS. I loved the randomness of it all and how Steve was so random and dramatic.

Serial molester... rofl... and when Steve was thinking in his head about how he was being molested. omg... so great. What a dork P

BRILLIANT! Brilliant, marvelous, genius! Terrific, wonderful, spectacular! And my favorite word — spiffy!

Honestly, I really can't say why I'm so enamored with your story, but it's utterly fantastic! (Another word I forgot. Fantastic! Fabulous!) I think I will definitely add this to my Favorite Stories list, and also show it to my girlfriend. And read more of your stories. Definitely.

One thing, though. I believe there is a small typo — Adam says, "You are abusing my pillow," to which Steve responds, "Now when it's in my hands." Did you mean "not"?