That was a nice ending. Although, after it having taken place over 5 monthes, it seems kind of hard to believe that Cara might think it was a dream. After everything that happened; it seems like there's no way it could have been a dream.

Oh no! KIP! How could he... how could he... no, he can't! I won't believe it! He must survive! He must!

Wow! This chapter was really filled with lots of action! I can't wait to read the last one!!

OMG! Someone was lying in wait for them! I was going to say how sad I was about Cara and Kade having to separate from the others forever, but after I read that last line in this chapter, my thoughts completely changed! I definitely wasn't expecting that! Wow! Now I can't wait to read what happens next!

Ah, the romance comes out! Kade and Cara seem so cute together... you just know they're going to end up together! Just one suggestion this time: maybe add a little bit of detail on the surroundings of the characters. It's a little difficult to imagine them in a setting when you don't really describe it. Even for areas that the story may have already been, just to remind the reader of what you want it to look like.

She's alive! Don't worry, take all the time you need. Ahem, on to the review... Still got an amazing story going! Again, the only thing I'm noticing is that you need to proofread. Sometimes there are words missing in a sentance, and sometimes a simiar word to the one you are trying to put in gets there instead. Well, 'till I read the next chapter! I can't wait to read the rest, now that it's complete!

~coolmegan123

Wow... never saw that coming from Cara... Ah hem, well, at least they got away. Should be interesting to see what happens next! My only advice is to proof-read your chapters.

Aww... that's nice, they're getting married! I wonder what Whiifrow's talking about? "I knew there was a reason I bonded to communicate with you." Can't wait to read more! Just noticed some minor word errors in some of the sentances, guess you forgot to take them out. Maybe proofread after you're done if you're not already. Even just skim it. Well, keep it up! Can't wait for more!

Well that's... interesting. I think Cara's finally lost it! Wonder how they're going to get out of this mess? Well, as usual, keep on writing please!

Hmm... I wonder what the rest of the story said? I found it kind of odd when Blackfox said that it ended right after the defeat. It's almost like it just 'drops off'. Makes me wonder why Blackfox didn't want to read the other part when Standing Feather mentioned it to her. She seemed like she was avoiding it. I wonder what was written there... Anyways... keep on writin'! Can't wait to read more!

The conversation between Whiifrow and Cara was very interesting. Definitely makes the story all the more suspenseful. She thought she had the power to change what she wanted now that she has met the characters for herself, but what Whiifrow has said now has changed that...

Yay! I finally caught up! Keep on writin' girl! I can't wait to read more!

Wow. Whiifrow seems stubborn. At first he seemed all knowledgeable and everything, but know he almost sounds like he's being downright rude to them. It's interesting, the story of how he moved Cara/Carien'yth between the worlds before she was even born. And now, she came back... wonder if that was him as well.

I'm guessing they were captured by someone? The people that have them don't seem to be very nice. The fact that Cara took a blow to the head, and woke up with bound wrists kinda says that. I wonder by who though? Someone must've known about them...

I like that you've been alternating the chapters between Kip's journey group and Cara's. It works really well.

Talk about confusing directions! They meant for them to follow the river in the sky, not on the ground. That seems a little cryptic; I wonder why they didn't give them more straightforward directions like they thought they had.

Wow! The story just keeps getting more and more interesting at every turn! I wonder if Cara's going to tell them who she is! It must be so hard for her to keep such a huge secret welled up in her; especially from the resistance, those that would probably be able to help her most.

Lots of good background information in this chapter. Even some funny moments to! It really helps to deepen the plot.