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Durak 2008-07-13 . chapter 1
That's two for two so far - both of the haikus I've read thus far I liked.

This one was much easier for me to understand than the last one. Unfortunately, I have very little to say. Good imagery, poetic (naturally) explanation of a simple phone call and (again naturally) concisely phased. I liked it; I suppose I have to leave it at that.

-Durak
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