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I.Wannabe.Classy 2009-09-17 . chapter 1
That is really realistic and sad for the character..
I'll just insert a personal note:
I don't like alot (most of) self harmer fics but this one got to me. There's no excess angst or horrible family drama but realism.
It's also something I (and others) can relate to.
erasmuss 2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Wow.
This really kept me on the edge of my seat.
You can /feel/ how much he hates himself. I love it, it's gorgeous.
I dont normally gte into oneshots like this but deh- this was good.
I think I saw a total of...three spelling mistakes...but no ones going to hold that aginst you.

I have to say I loveth eimage of this plae, wide eyed, zombified teenager walking into the emgercy room in his PJ's and covered in blood.
It annoys me in story's where characters cnat lie. A lot of poeple lie so easily, it's a tallent. I loved that about this charcater.
And I love the idea of there being seven razors, wheather that was intentional or not. It reminds me of the seven deadly sins, all self indulgent, slef loving and selth loathing at the same time. Just selfish, which is what he is even when he's thinking about other people. It's 'he doesnt deserve them'...

The end was beautiful too...so empty and despairing.

I'm a sick puppy freak. I love broken things...and that last line made me want to scoop him up and kiss him all the way to hell, helping him bleed.

Ah- Wunderba!
Now I must read the rest of your crap...if it's as intense as that.

LoveLove.

Erasmuss.
Raye12307 2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Wow. You captured it perfectly. I used to be exactly like that (not anymore thanks to one amazing person), and this is the first time I've seen it written down how it really was. I was kind of shocked actually at the line "I cut because I would explode if I didn't," just because everyone always seems to assume that it's for a single event or reason, and really it mostly isn't. Well done.
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