I really enjoyed reading this story, in fact, this is the second time i've read it. *sigh* if only we all had Zack Kos... Anyway, please, pretty please, write the one shot about Dale and Chris? Really looking forward to it! (actually i'm hoping i will visit your profile now and it will be sitting there!.. but maybe not) THANK YOU!

just finished chap 2
it's great so far. please tell me zacks feelings won't get hurt in the end I really like him
aniwaii off to read some more:D

I think this was a really great story...up until Chris punched her in the nose and no one did anything. I don't care how much she said she deserved it, I doubt Jared wouldn't have hit him or that Dale wouldn't have done more. That part just seems unrealistic. I think there also should have been more dialogue between them at the end about what Zack said to Jared, how he saw her run out, etc. It just seemed a little too rushed.

Good job, though! (:

Kinda knew Lauren and Zack would end up together (for real, not for show) when he was first introduced. Cute story!! I definitely laughed-out-loud when I read about Chris acting like a lost puppy. Ha ha, he'd be so cute if he wasn't so hot!

Sweet and simple, just the way I like it.
Love the story and well done.
I'm going to favourite this : )

Loved it! Great job!

that was cute. i was for zack/lauren from the start, jarred just seemed like an airhead to me for some reason? =D

i think ur summary wa reli reli good but i didnt like the story very much. sorry!

great little short story.
i loved it. =]

it was super cute. zack is a total sweetheart. :)

Dear MadForFigs,

I really like the way you write. I've read a few of your stories and they're all really good. Yes, even the fluff. SO, um, that's pretty much it, yeah.

Great story, though short, but so worth it! :D

I just have to say before I start to read, I adore the summary. Kudos.

*Will read now, Ciao.

Wow that was really really good!
I understand why you're dissapointed with the last chapter, but you honestly shouldn't be too worried about it. It ended just like I wanted it too...
Looking forward to your Chris-Dale story.
Oh and just a random fact (you probably don't want to know), I love the names you've given to the male leads in the story (namely Zack, Chris and Brett)..

This was amazing! I really liked it. :)