I apologize that it has taken me so long to review this amazing story of yours. I still love it!

I'm so glad Chael and Yoku have their memories back. I just love Grove. He is an amazing friend. But I hate that emperor! I knew as soon as that lady opened her mouth that he would kill her! Ugh, he is insane!! I sure hope our heroic threesome can make it safely to the caves without any interruption from Glen! But then again, I love the action! Can't wait to read more soon!

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wow...seems like that Empero is losing his sanity more and more every chapter. Keep it up- this story is exciting.

So glad that you finally updated!
i love this story and i can't wait to see where it goes.
Keep it up, okay? And thanks for the AIM saying you updated- I appreciate it!

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thats cute! are they goign to get narried?i think they should! but why isn't this tory done?

wow that nurse is really dumb even i would no not to do that wit ha prisoner

NO!
i dno't want them to go back wit hthe emperor! why!

that sucks that shes clastrophobic.
i cant imagine that woud suck really bad.
i hope they almost hook up soon.
why no breaking headboards yet

will they kiss soon! i hope so!
great chappie

ok so they are going back to earth to run away from the Emperor so that they do'nt have to deal with hime? hm weird.but i like it

wow...
thats harsh but i hope that you let them all be okay

great fisrt chapter!

I am definetly not confused! But I want to SCREAM! No no! Yoku and Chael have to come to! Grove needs to save them. And Glen is just so sickening it makes me want to jump into the computer and punch his face in!

Whoa, calm down! haha!

One major error that I think should be clarified is that in the first part where Grove is arguing with the nurse, you use Chael's name, not Groves.

anyways, I loved this chapter and i thought the part where you had Yoku accidentaly call Chael "Curator" was perfect. I just wanted to screa at them: "Come on Chael! You know what you are and you need to keep Yoku from marrying Glen! Augh!

I thought Grove's thoughts were flippin hillarious too "Im going to kill this nurse!" Haha i seriously laughed out loud.

He had other good lines too like the pissed off ignoti. lol.

You write great and I love this story.

And I can't wait until Glen gets his.

Great job, once again. Can't wait for another update!

Wow I am really impressed. Your choice of dialog is beautiful and insightfull. I am truly enjoying this journey. I have never been a BETA and not quite sure what that entails, however if you would be willing to school me on the preliminaries I would be honored to be your BETA. I understand if you want a more experianced BETA but like I said I would be honored. Just let me know.

This is a great story the characters are so alive and so well written I cant wait to read the next chapter. Please oh please hurry its like waiting for "breaking Dawn" to come out jezzee... Not a patient person but love your story.

Well that's definately an interesting turn of events. o.o x3 It's getting along very well~