You surely do know your characters, don't you? You've described them so well I could see them.
One suggestion might be that you could add a bit of description after ever dialogue - you've already done this, but a bit more may give the reader more of the whole picture.
Narq.

It's defintely a very intersting read. Unlike other stories on this site you manage to hold the readers attention and the story doesn't get boring. Your characters have good personalities

Onto the critism: Sometimes you over-describe things. There was alot of unnessory description in this. Some of the paragraphs seem a tad dodgy but besides that you've done a nice job! Good work! ^^

Good start! I'm looking forward to more!

Awesome title. =)

Anyway, to the story!!

There's nothing wrong with it, really. It's pretty nice.

Hi! I like both vampires and werewolves so I'm always up for a story with both. :)

I think you may have 'told' a little too much instead of 'showing'.

also,

I loved working there and I got with everyone.

I think you meant, I got along with everyone. :)

Brian Valmont, I like him already. :)

Nice foreshadowing at the end by the way. :)

I like this so far and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ciao!

~nicola~