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| mia5081 2008-08-19 ch 5,  | abuseI feel like Kira was completely preoccupied with...other things--mainly not Daniel. Which sucks, because I want him to be happy. I hope she's not thinking of someone else. Update soon! ~mia |
| rachely 2008-08-19 ch 5, | abuseIt was sweet. :) |
| lover or hater 2008-08-19 ch 1, | abusei wonder whats he going to suprise her with... i bet he askes her to marry him and she'll prob. say ill think about then that would make for an arkward night at thier house lol so update soon!! |
| mia5081 2008-08-10 ch 4, | abuseI wonder if Kira wants to go back to Duke. I hope she doesn't. I don't want her to hurt poor Daniel. Update soon! |
| rachely 2008-08-10 ch 4, | abuseI like this chapter. I wish Kira would realize how much Daniel does love her. |
| mia5081 2008-07-31 ch 3, | abuseWait! Is she starting to wish she hadn't chosen Daniel over Duke? Oh man, that would provide soo much drama. And I would feel so bad for Daniel. Loved it at any rate :D Update soon! ~Mia |
| rachely 2008-07-29 ch 3, | abuseaw, this was cute. I understand where Kira stands but they've been together for a year, right? How can she not feel that he left the "player" thing behind? I guess I'll find out.. :P |
| lover or hater 2008-07-29 ch 3, | abusewhy dosent she love him.. i mean after everything? but still cant wait to read the rest |
| mia5081 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseInteresting start. I had been hoping that their lives together would be flawless and perfect and a happy ending but...when does that ever happen is reality? lol. Update soon! ~Mia |
| lover or hater 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abusei think it was a good idea. i have read to close but so far and i thought it was good.. well update soon |
| rachely 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseI like the sequel idea. They can end up getting married..maybe they have a fall-out or something. The chapters aren't very long, and you kind of jumped around. Are they at a restaurant? Or what? Some things just need to be cleared up. |
| rachely 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseYeah, pretty rough..but it's kinda like a prologue. im excited to read this. :) |
| Koki Enwai 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseOoh, looks interesting, but I can't really say any more than that! It's so short! I'll definitely come round for the next chapter. Hope it's on its way! - Koki |