Haha, I like Luther. Like the story too. :)

Haha this is brilliant!
(And delightful in one sense. :P)
Love great, short little pieces like this.
x.

Hi, interesting story/read and I noticed that you've been writing comments on a lot of peoples' romances but not mine so I decided to just drop you a comment randomly... um, you shouldn't have so many paragraphs... so if you want me to beta for you I'd gladly do it for this story- I'm not sure that I can handle much more horror than this. But yeah, this is a good one-shot :P. -JSM

That's cool. Haha. You reviewed my story so I looked at yours.

Man, this is so much better than the thing I wrote. =D So awesome.

Wow a well written story. However I must say the ending was a bit predictable. Well for me anyway. But i loved the eerieness you built up so well. And Luther he seems like a troubled soul trapped in his manners. A great read.

Nice one^^
Well written, well characterized.
In fact, I think I might have to go and read some of your other work...

A nicely written piece, is the age of the main character up for interpretation or is their an age you have in mind?

Whoa, the end totally surprised me. I loved how most of Luther's thoughts sounded so mocking, you'd think I would have gotten that sooner!

Wonderful job, a good little morbid piece. :)

Crap. I made the mistake of reading the last line first. It was pretty good.

That was so chilling and kind of creepy..but really well written. Awesome job. :)

This piece made me shudder. Very well written. Short, but powerful and chilling.
Well done. Thanks for the review, sorry it took me forever to return it. =]

That was really, really, really, good!
The last sentence gave me chills.
Well done. xD.

Oh wow, that's pretty chilling.

Nice and simple, but it leaves us with that whole "dun dun dun" thing.

Nice job. :D

I like how this is extremely short, but still gets in a good story and keeps you guessing...

I would like to find out more about Luther and James...

Overall, good work. :) I hope to read more from you.

~Shenhua Phantom

Oo, nice story. The ending was a shocker. Good job