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| layne 2008-09-06 ch 16, anon. | abusei love lucy. she is the best. hopefully this story goes on past 17 chapters. i feel like i want to read more about callie's progression through her new life, even after her old one has been resolved. |
| bongi 2008-09-06 ch 16, anon. | abuseGlad you're safe and back home, also for selfish reasons, he, he. The story is moving at a breakneck speed and is full of shocks. It makes my days more interesting as do all your stories. |
| the kitten 2008-09-06 ch 16,  | abuseI don't really get the part with "Pa"'s death, but hey, it doesn't have to be logical, does it? I mean, Callie's a siren, anything can happen. however, I liked it, and I hope that you'll hurry up with that wedding! |
| Lady Katreina 2008-09-01 ch 15, | abuseHmm, that's certainly interesting. I wonder how it'll all turn out. Is Buford going to be "home" in time to catch Lucy's act? How raging mad will he be? Thank you for updating! Every word, for each prospective, is wonderfully perfect. THANK YOU AGAIN! (And again, and again...) |
| Lady Tsuki Seishin 2008-09-01 ch 15, | abuseAh! Not fair! Not fair! Need next chapter! Gonna cry! Waah! |
| lacy-9 2008-08-31 ch 15, | abuse:) good chapter! i hope that the hurricane doesnt hit yall too hard. ha but its definetly going to do some damage if you live around the gulf.. |
| xhianglian 2008-08-30 ch 15, | abuseevil b@stard! |
| FM Radio 2008-08-29 ch 15, | abuseMe Lovee O for udpating! BUT I hate you with the firey passion of a thousand burning suns for leaving us with that ending, because it was such a cliffhanger. Note the sarcasm. Honestly, I don't hate you for ending the chapter like that, it wasn't that bad of a cliffhanger. You're usually pretty consistant with your updates, so it doesn't seem as bad as it could. Update soon! |
| XX-Heart 2008-08-29 ch 15, | abuseI just got back from a trip and i'm surprise u updated this fast and this many chapters (u desrve an imaginary cookie) hope u update soon and stay safe from the hurricane p.S Drink plenty of milk |
| FM Radio 2008-08-28 ch 14, | abusegoddamn. That makes me satisfied. I love how that justice was doled out! I like Mister Chauvan the most! I love how he had everything in his daughter's name. JUSTICE! Update soon, and great job! |
| Stang65 2008-08-28 ch 14, | abuseOMG! PERFECT! I loved this chapter, it was so fitting. Now it's time for her disgusting father to get his... hint, hint. Such a great job on this story. |
| xhianglian 2008-08-28 ch 14, | abuseloved it! absolutely adored this chapter! GO GIRL! |
| Lady Tsuki Seishin 2008-08-27 ch 14, | abuseOh. My. God. That was...amazing! Beautiful! Spectacular! I can't wait for your next update! By God, I hope you decide to submit this for publishing when it's finished because I want a material copy to read over and over again! You're the best writer I've read in a long time. Lotsa love, and hoping you update soon, Tsuki. |
| Lady Katreina 2008-08-27 ch 14, | abuseI art smug. Ha. Take THAT loser! I love that he was a jerk; no one liked him anyways. Thank you for updating, I love that Dmitri knocked him around and that Callie is getting her day, soon to be life. It's going to be fun seeing what happens next- and is Kirk somehow going to come back and bother the Chancers? I can only wait; thank you for making me want to wait. |
| Hiromi 2008-08-27 ch 14, | abuseThat was very, very satisfying indeed. They're so sweet together. |