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| dawn9800 2008-08-30 ch 4,  | abuseJust now read chapters 2-4 for some reason it didnt tell me when they where posted! They are great and I CANNOT wait for more! |
| Demon 18 2008-08-16 ch 7, | abuseThis was a good chapter, it gave a little insight into Oprin's mind. Keep up the good work. |
| justsomegirl-13 2008-08-15 ch 6, | abusesorry for reviewing so late but my computer died anyways good chapter. I still dont like Jeremy though, Oprin is ok i guess. |
| Demon 18 2008-08-05 ch 6, | abuseHm, I liked it. I never really hated Jeremy, I just didn't like him that much. I could, however see his side. Oprin is awesome. I don't know why, but I like Oprin. Over all, good chapter. |
| justsomegirl-13 2008-08-01 ch 5, | abusewow, didn't expect that to happen. can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Demon 18 2008-08-01 ch 5, | abuseOh no! Wow I'm not sure who's side to be on right now... Its so confusing... Oh well I loved it all the same and can't wait for another! Breaking Dawn should tide me over for a while though lol. |
| Demon 18 2008-07-22 ch 4, | abuseDun dun dun! Frina has returned! Nice job with this chapter lol |
| Lionesscouer 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseAh ah... now i'm understanding the grandmothers craziness... very nice ... i'm also wondering about those smoothies.. a few typos here and there.. but still a great story which I look forward to keep reading! : ) |
| Demon 18 2008-07-16 ch 3, | abusePoor Terra! I'm adicted! I have one question though. In the first chapter where it talked about the strawberry smoothies. Were they so good because they had some blood in them? That's probably a stupid question and I feel slow for asking, but whatever. |
| Demon 18 2008-07-16 ch 2, | abuseYou get the words since and sense mixexd up. Sense is like common sense and since is used kinda like this. Ever since then I have had many adventures. Good job though. |
| Lionesscouer 2008-07-16 ch 2, | abuseWhy does her grandmother hate her so much? I thought she came out of the hypnotic state she was in in the last story and knew that she had killed her daughter.. i'm so confused.. I almost didn't start reading this right away.. i was still so sad from the ending of the last story, but I'm so glad you are writing this...it's great so far!! |
| Emma Gammon 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseOh this is so great!! You totally made me cry on the last book of the series, so I'm expecting many big twists around with this XD oh by the, this "accept for Grandmother" is except instead of accept. you tend to confuse those a lot through all the stories. Can't wait for the next!! :D |
| Demon 18 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Sounds like she has it pretty rough. I like it though and hope its as good as the others. |
| xx 3DD Fan 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseOh I like this story so far! You make the main character very likable. |
| dawn9800 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseOH! Im excited!! |