this paints a beautiful picture, my only suggestion is to fix the line "fragrant in their fragrance' because it's redundant.

"fragrant in their fragrance."... that line was way to repetitive in my opinion

I like your personification of the cherry blossoms, that was really well done. I also like "verdant walkway" because the word choice was really great.

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