Hey- So I started reading this story on authonomy and I remember seeing it here on FP so I just had to come over here to see if there were any more updates.

But ya, I like your characters and plotlines and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.


and ps...make sure you keep Nyx and Tristen together. AJ was a flake

Plz finish the story. I have been dying to read more. U had to finish the story for the publishers so plz put it on here! Also boo for aj I don't like him. Yay for tristan he's smoking and cool

omg!!
WRITE SOME MORE!
This is great!
Keep going!
I love it SOO much!

Would love to hear how things are working out with the possible publishers. Don't leave us in the dark!

Waiting faithfully for update (or possibly publishing),
FindingADream

Oh my God I LOVE this story. SO much. I am practically in agony what with Tristan and Nyx being all split up and all...I read the old version but this is even better, I am so glad you reposted it!
Cannot wait for the next chapter, please please please update soon!

Wow. I've just read the last 10 chapters or so and wow. So many things happened! There were many sad and emotional parts and I must admit I prefer those to the too perfect, fairy-tale like scenes. (Like the brother-sister reunion ages ago.) At times the Nyx-Tristan relationship seemed too sweet and perfect, too. Nyx and AJ are much more interesting from this point of view. I support Tristan despite everything. :D Yeah, I don't understand myself either.

What I really, really liked was the song! I liked that small bit of lyrics you provided (do you happen to have written the whole of the song? I'd love to read it.), the title, the story behind it. Oh, and the video! Yep. :)

Hope you update soon!

sunny-raindrop

AJ AND TRISTAN ARE BOTH ** MORONS!

seriously. if anyone should know the difference between business and real life it should be Tristan. but no. he just had to be a douche.
and now AJ is gunna capitalize on this. (not that this is a bad thing... lol)
but i just love Tristan! AJ had his chance! and he blew it so much worse! and i know Tristan is gunna go and blow it too!

why? WHY?!

poor nyxie...

I finally got around to reading this, I've been wanting to for weeks, and it didn't disappoint! Amazing first chapter, I particularly loved the sections in Emily's and AJ's POV; they were just hilarious. Great job!

Did you know there is a spanish band called Russian Red for the lipstick?

Apparently I haven't reviewed yet!
Obviously last time I read your massive update I was dying from emotional exhaustion. But, where can I get an invite to the Carrington family? Sometime soon please?

no no no NO
they b-b-broke up. :((
ohmigawd. that can't be happening.
i so have like ryan ross sa AJ in my mind
and like ed westwick or chace crawford as tristan
drol.

OMG! UPDATE ASAP!

Still too lazy to sign in. Heh.

I'm all sad now. haha. I wasn't going to read until you had more up because I knew this part was coming, but I couldn't help it. The emotions are so much more apparent this time around. You can really feel it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

too lazy to sign in. I realy want to read 16 and 17, but I must go to sleep. But I can smell drama ensuing. I'm very excited.

~Kelsey

Oh... sadness... wow typing is wierd... my hand is bleeding under my skin... yeah gross? I don't know, it feels really wierd though.

Anyways on with the review - sadness, YAY for three new chapters, but sadness for the breakup, though it was inevitable, i want them to get back together ASAP... even though it probably won't happen ASAP. Man... living together will be AWKWARD! Boo for AJ, it's officially decided that I plain don't like him, officially.

On the technical side, good grammar, good vocab and spelling as usual, awesome plot development, still very unique story. Update soon please