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Alien Altered 2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Aw, sad, but cute. I love how you wrote 'healthy plant grown from rotted seed', its a great visual. Once again, very well written, Awesome!
Jack Saucy 2008-07-15 . chapter 1
only nit-picking with this i have is the word sad. it's weak, and i know you could figure out something with more eloquence (sorrow, melancholy, torture, etc.).

"Healthy plant grown from rotted seed"
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