I like your imagery, though I can't agree with such a black and white statement. If the wrongs brought about by evil people could be put right with simple communication, simple lack of military resistance then the Holocaust would never have happened. But, despite our different views, this was a quite moving poem. Towards the end it became off the beat and even a bit cliche, but the beginning and middle were definitely well done. The first six lines I think are my favorite. Good job.

Ashelin

Amazing! This piece is very true and begs the everlasting question 'Why?'
You wrote it very well, and I love it. Congrats on portraying it so accuratly.
Very well done.

your message is as intense as it ever was. no criticism here. way to go!