|Reviews for Not to be Untangled|
| Shante 7/23/08 . chapter 1
I really like this poem...it was mad deep...loved the intertwining of the dreams with reality!
| Delany Lamb 7/15/08 . chapter 1
That is such a lovely piece of writing.
Very powerful and moving.
The use of rhyme is very effective in creating a rhythm that the reader can relax into. I love the way you discribe the young man hanging himself. It is nearly surprising. Very interesting.