morbid, but truthful. beautifully expressed. i enjoyed this very much.

a bit morbid but true. reminds me of this line in All Quiet on the Western Front where paul says that "all we know of life is death". actually it may not be all that true because in the mormon faith they believe love, once you're married, lasts for eternity. others believe that death is only a discontinuation of a physical form whereas love is not a physical form and therefor can never end. i guess it depends what you believe. anyways, very good, i like how the bold print creates visual interest. that's a sign of a developed writer