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| Thoughtful Silence 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the vivid imagery in this... 'I'll drink in the moon' was a great line. I didn't get the last line though which detracted from this poem slightly... Anyways, keep up the good work. - Thoughtful Silence, courtesy of The Roadhouse (link in my profile). |
| Laura Schiller 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseDrinking in the moon is a beautiful idea and I like the way you describe it. But why is it "the fourth part"? Why don't you name the others? |
| ninjawitch93 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abusewow. Short but beautiful! I loved it! Keep up the great work; awesome job! |