I loved the vivid imagery in this... 'I'll drink in the moon' was a great line. I didn't get the last line though which detracted from this poem slightly... Anyways, keep up the good work.

- Thoughtful Silence, courtesy of The Roadhouse (link in my profile).

Drinking in the moon is a beautiful idea and I like the way you describe it. But why is it "the fourth part"? Why don't you name the others?

wow. Short but beautiful! I loved it! Keep up the great work; awesome job!