So confused~ BUT, I'm still enjoying it! I will figure this out eventually!

aww poor Palin x3

in the ending note you said 'kathy's girlfriend'. shouldn't it be boyfriend?

anyway, this is adorable. i do wonder about palin, though. all that coffee must be messing with his head.

this is adorable. all of it. palin's quirky, salem's a perv, loth...well, he's an alien, and van's fench (enough said). anyway, i love it, even though i hate coffee with a passion. please write more. ^_^

Lol...I have no idea what to think about the dry state which Palin seems ot take this all in...But it is really great.

Haha! Awesome! :)

Poor Palin, it's like he's a weirdo magnet. ^_^ Of course, if he wasn't, he wouldn't be as interesting. Anyways, this chapter is pretty hilarious! Hope to see the next one soon!

This story is actually quiet interesting, and makes me want to read more. It also makes me want to take out my red pen and make it all pretty, but then it might not be as interesting. You do have some small mistake I don't think are on purpose, though, so you might want to reread it a little.

Oh, and did you take Grimjaw from Bleach?