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| mystic-georgia 2005-07-08 ch 11,  | abuseVery nice and darkly put. I still wonder how you manage to create new stories but somehow distract yourself from your other stories. Please update Lilith soon. You put it on one of your 'Checklists' on your profile. I'm only casually trying to remind you. *peace out* |
| Coin Master 2004-05-10 ch 11, | abuseTrusted the secret to a human? I'm guessing that's a bad thing. Update Soon! WL |
| Coin Master 2004-05-10 ch 10, | abuseWhoa. Intense as. Update soon WL |
| Coin Master 2004-05-10 ch 4, | abuseWhoa. Kinda reminds me about the culture-shock thing that was shown (off-screen) in Power Rangers Time Force (Yr 30 ppl adjusting to 2001) and Wild Force (Ancient warrior waking up in present). Very riveting. Must update. WL |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 11, | abuseWillum- Nicely done! I liked this chapter best, so far. Too bad for ole David Cutter, he now rests where he belongs. Well written chapter, Willum. Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 10, | abuseHeh- Frank's a pretty cool character. Funny too. They'll hate each other, but atleast Frank is there to help him out. Well done Willum, nice chapter! Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 9, | abuseWillum- Well to be honest, this should be Rated R. The language, and all. But anyway, things are getting pretty interesting, and very suspicious. Nicely done! Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 8, | abuseWillum- Claire was pretty cool. I like her. Agent Bender is an a-hole as well. Jealous maybe. Well written, and nicely done, Willum. Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 7, | abuseWillum- Intense chapter again. Especially towards the end, wonders what will happen. Hmms, a lot of things could happen. Nice job! Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 6, | abuseYikes- Intense chapter Willum. Geez, just wondering what would happen if the Elders , and human race were wiped out, thats just sad. Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 5, | abuseHmm...- Very interesting, and suspenceful. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 4, | abuseWillum- Soffillian is an a-hole. He thinks he is all this great person. Very arrogant I might add. Doward better watch his back. Nice chapter! Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 3, | abuseWillum- Tired..poor old man..everybody needs sleep. Very good. Cliffhanger!! WHispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 2, | abuseWillum- Not a fan of first person, but I like this one. Very good. Funny in some parts, but all in all, great job! Whispers In Silence |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-29 ch 1, | abuseHello Willum- I should have read this while I had time. But I liked this one. Nice job. Whispers In Silence |