Good job!
And thanks for the mention in this last chapter. :)
I'm always happy to review a good story and this happens to be on eof them.
So update soon so that I can read more on this story.

i'd like to see what happens next :)
you have a few common mistakes like using you're when it's your but those are whatever :P
update soon!

Good job! And thanks for the mention in this chapter!
Update soon! Want to read more!

Feedback? And help? Well sorry but all I have to say is good job and update soon. That's enough help right? :P It should get you motivated to get the next chapter up. I can't wait to see where this is going. Love it!

hey,
this sounds interesting
can't wait to read more
cool
over and out

Good job! Oh thanks for the mention in this chapter. Love it! Update right away, though! Love it so far! ;P

Hm very interesting so far. Lol! Update soon, I'd like to see what is going to happen. Haha!

Pretty good so far. However, thoughts don't need "" marks around them, and there was also a typo or two. In addition to that, you repeat Roxi's name an awful lot when it isn't necessarily needed. . .

Aside from that, I rather liked it. It looks like you've got a promising story, so I'll definitely be back for more.

- Koki