Wow. This is great, keep it coming.

Remarkably intelligent. I applaud you!

Jeez man! Can you sound any more intellegent? I barely can read it, and I take joy in reading college textbooks on history and psychology...

That was excellent, as usual! Can't wait for more!

Wow, this was great! I really loved it, fabulous job - as usual! I've read some of your other stories and I find them very interesting! Once again, quite reminiscent of Twilight.

Excellent job!
Zillah

Excellent job, just loved this scene! Great character evolution... I don't know whether you'll consider this bad or good, but it reminded me distinctly of "Twilight," by Stephenie Meyer. I consider that a complement.

Great job!

Loved it! =D

It was very good... I liked it a lot, excellent job.

NaNoWriMo =D

Very good job, love it! Can't wait for more!

whoa, that's something... :) I only got to read the first few paragraphs but i know i'm going to finish this. :) it sounds remarkable. :)