Wow, this family just attracts tragedy! You've come up with some interesting scenarios.

Maybe you could put in quick character descriptions for the recap? Often times I found myself forgetting who's who and had to backtrack. There were also a few typos, missing commas, etc. Nothing a quick once over couldn't fix.

Well damn you for ending it like that! I was waiting all along for some grand gesture that Kyle was still alive! It's just like a television show to leave us hanging like that! You best not wait too long to publish a new episode!

Overall great writing! It is definitely meant to be the script of a television show. Good, crisp dialogue. I wish you could attach soundbites for background music for each scene. That'd be such a great addition to this!

I loved it! Can't wait for the rest!