PERFET! PURE GENIUS! the only error is here: about he about that mysterious, untrustworthy black figure who’d let him slip back through time. But he was up on this roof because the one thing on his mind kept him from going to sleep.


OTHER THAN THAT, IT WAS PERFECT! I LOVE IT, THAT WAS LIKE, THE MOST AMAZING STORY I'VE READ ON HERE! NO JOKE, I SWEAR MAN, YOU'D BETTER FINISH THIS! ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER, THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY, YOU HAVE TO COMPLETE IT, YOU JUST HAVE TO.

ANYWAYS, THIS IS XWARRIOR1, OUT!