More!!

nice.

aw. -cheesy grin-

xD I love cheesiness. I live for it1 Haha, kidding, but that was adorable. x3 I loved it. :D

It was okay. I can't see it actually happening. Because well, 10 years man. That's a long time. And I actually don't think it's that cliche. Compared to other stuff I read, your stuff is actually quite original. I don't really like baseball, so that's why I wasn't that into it. And I don't know, I just believe somehow, you get over somebody. It's tragic, but it happens whether you want it to or not. I really like the concept and title though. :)

God I hate emo’s. This isn't emo, this is "angst" An angst fest is what is. And it's adorable. I don't know if this story is going to beat "The Shed" in its awesomeness. But, I guess I should read the rest to find out. You go into description pretty well with all your stories so short, but this one I can't see myself imaging what Matt and Ally look like but their cute together, like it is with all your other stories they just mush together. If you get what I mean. Heart-warming... is the best way I can describe the stuff you write. Sounds lame but it really gets me in the sweet factor. Oh yeah, it's funny too.

Very cute.

I love how sweet and innocent this story is. Makes me feel sad that my childhood was so much less eventful. :P Nicely written.

-smiles cheesily-
I love cheesy stories. They're just so...cheesily awesome!
This last chapter had me smiling all the way through it...This was SO freaking cute. I loved it!
Thanks for yet another amazingly awesome story! =]

Aww!! That was too cute! I love the childhood friendship-turned-relationship stories. Anyway, I loved the way you wrote this. Cute, funny, and realistic. I loved that all the amazing baseball feats weren't about her or Mattie, but their friends, and I thought that the whole bit about everyone moving away was sad, but it happens. A bit cliche, but what else can you expect from these? I thought it was really well-written and I have nothing at all to criticize (which is pretty big for me since I'm completely anal and all...) Keep up the amazing work!

Oh, that was very sweet! And who cares if it reminds you of the Sandlot? What better movie is there? :D

Honestly--I've seen cheesier. This is fine. Cute, too.

A well-rounded short story with characters who have just enough depth to keep us entertained, but not enough that we're begging for more, which is a good thing, as the story ends here.

It was a very sweet read; I loved the summer setting. There's something so...alive about warm summer nights on grass, with crickets chirping and the pavement illuminated far away.

oh my god, i think im actually crying. YOU SUCK!...kidding, just kidding. This was a really unique and original story, even if you thought the ending was cheesie...which it was. But hey, im a sucker for NACHO CHEESE. Lol. Uhm ...i have nothing bad to say; except i think the last 2-3 paragraphs were a little bit rushed, but thats okay .GOOD JOB! and keep it up. I WANT ANOTHER NOT-SO-ONE-SHOT-ONE-SHOT!...please?have a brownie-Chelsea

Oh my God. It was so good. The truth is, I wasn't actually going to read this story, but I got the email that said it had been updated, and I said 'what the hell?'. And I'm so glad I did, this was amazing. It was sweet and funny and adorable. I'm so glad that I decided to read it.

~Malice

Yeah I love that cliche too, it would be among my favourites with love/hate.
Cute ending, and I love how you brought it back to that kiss so long ago - and then made them kiss again.

I thought that was a really cute ending. Cheesy, yes, but very -adorably- cute. Keep it up and keep the stories coming!
Faith