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hiya 2008-12-26 . chapter 4
More!!
Hazelnut Romance 2008-12-23 . chapter 4
nice.
Kisnie 2008-11-01 . chapter 4
aw. -cheesy grin-

xD I love cheesiness. I live for it1 Haha, kidding, but that was adorable. x3 I loved it. :D
telepop 2008-10-25 . chapter 4
It was okay. I can't see it actually happening. Because well, 10 years man. That's a long time. And I actually don't think it's that cliche. Compared to other stuff I read, your stuff is actually quite original. I don't really like baseball, so that's why I wasn't that into it. And I don't know, I just believe somehow, you get over somebody. It's tragic, but it happens whether you want it to or not. I really like the concept and title though. :)
telepop 2008-10-24 . chapter 2
God I hate emo’s. This isn't emo, this is "angst" An angst fest is what is. And it's adorable. I don't know if this story is going to beat "The Shed" in its awesomeness. But, I guess I should read the rest to find out. You go into description pretty well with all your stories so short, but this one I can't see myself imaging what Matt and Ally look like but their cute together, like it is with all your other stories they just mush together. If you get what I mean. Heart-warming... is the best way I can describe the stuff you write. Sounds lame but it really gets me in the sweet factor. Oh yeah, it's funny too.
cbprice25 2008-10-01 . chapter 4
Very cute.
Jenc11 2008-08-23 . chapter 4
I love how sweet and innocent this story is. Makes me feel sad that my childhood was so much less eventful. :P Nicely written.
Waitingnotsopatiently 2008-08-02 . chapter 4
-smiles cheesily-
I love cheesy stories. They're just so...cheesily awesome!
This last chapter had me smiling all the way through it...This was SO freaking cute. I loved it!
Thanks for yet another amazingly awesome story! =]
Rhapsody's Song 2008-08-02 . chapter 4
Aww!! That was too cute! I love the childhood friendship-turned-relationship stories. Anyway, I loved the way you wrote this. Cute, funny, and realistic. I loved that all the amazing baseball feats weren't about her or Mattie, but their friends, and I thought that the whole bit about everyone moving away was sad, but it happens. A bit cliche, but what else can you expect from these? I thought it was really well-written and I have nothing at all to criticize (which is pretty big for me since I'm completely anal and all...) Keep up the amazing work!
JamieBell 2008-07-31 . chapter 4
Oh, that was very sweet! And who cares if it reminds you of the Sandlot? What better movie is there? :D
The Cat Died Nobly 2008-07-29 . chapter 4
Honestly--I've seen cheesier. This is fine. Cute, too.

A well-rounded short story with characters who have just enough depth to keep us entertained, but not enough that we're begging for more, which is a good thing, as the story ends here.

It was a very sweet read; I loved the summer setting. There's something so...alive about warm summer nights on grass, with crickets chirping and the pavement illuminated far away.
kIlL yOu FoR a KlOnDiKe BaR 2008-07-29 . chapter 4
oh my god, i think im actually crying. YOU SUCK!...kidding, just kidding. This was a really unique and original story, even if you thought the ending was cheesie...which it was. But hey, im a sucker for NACHO CHEESE. Lol. Uhm ...i have nothing bad to say; except i think the last 2-3 paragraphs were a little bit rushed, but thats okay .GOOD JOB! and keep it up. I WANT ANOTHER NOT-SO-ONE-SHOT-ONE-SHOT!...please?have a brownie-Chelsea
Malice in Horrorland 2008-07-29 . chapter 4
Oh my God. It was so good. The truth is, I wasn't actually going to read this story, but I got the email that said it had been updated, and I said 'what the hell?'. And I'm so glad I did, this was amazing. It was sweet and funny and adorable. I'm so glad that I decided to read it.

~Malice
Pinkamoo 2008-07-29 . chapter 4
Yeah I love that cliche too, it would be among my favourites with love/hate.
Cute ending, and I love how you brought it back to that kiss so long ago - and then made them kiss again.
Faith Adeline 2008-07-28 . chapter 4
I thought that was a really cute ending. Cheesy, yes, but very -adorably- cute. Keep it up and keep the stories coming!
Faith
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