A fantastic story!
I read it in one sitting.
I love that all your romance stories have a realist edge to them. Very refreshing! It's like, "Oh! This love story is so realistic I could imagine it happening to me!"
And yeah, I agree with toonmilli. I wish it were longer.
Again, great story!

awesome story!! It's so sweet and adorable lol and funny :)

aw :D

how sweet. I so like totally envy Sydney right about now. she has a HOT HOT HOT italian husband with sexy green eyes and sexy black hair and a probably even SEXIER body! ugh. lol

i'll go cry now at my unluckiness.

anyways, this was a great story =]

this chapter was very sad =[

ugh, hopefully chapter 15 will be happy :D

aw =[

i feel so bad for gavin. i'm mad at syd. ..i mean, who doesn't wanna have kids? i mean, sure they're loud and stinky at times, but they're sweet and cute too =]

but gr at sydney, and she better go do soemthing. >:[

haha, the white wine part was hilarious. and aww, that was so sweet how gavin took up for syd. when his dad was being a butt. aw

i want gavin! lol

aw. i love sydney and Gavin, they're so darn cute! AW

And the last part, aw, gosh, i'm such a sap, but it's just so sweet and cute. :D

lol, i love sydney and her sense of humor, this chapter had me laughing a good bit =]

this story is hilarious this part "What? Is he hitting on me? I can't believe he would hit on me!...Cool!" and this "And that week I got more good news. One of the cashiers, a retired woman named Ms. Daisy, had died! I was thus chosen to replace her. No more can-stacking, I was a cashier now. Yay!"

LOL, so funny, anyways, yes i'm pretty sure this will be going on my fav's soon, and Gavin sounds pretty hot =]

Great Story! I always love happy endings!

It's over already. Boo.

I wish there could have been more but I am glad they ended up together. And who is to say what will come to them in the future? That is the best thing about the end of a story. You can continue it in your mind any way you want.

Great story. I eagerly anticipate anything else you write in the future. Never stop writing!

I wish it was longer. It was really good but I would have liked to see more about the relationship. But good job. I read it all out in one sit.

I think this is my fav story ever

I could kick myself at this point. This is so frickin good. I love Gavin's POV.

Okay, I'll admit that the summary of this story kept me away for a really long time but I was really looking for something to read tonight... I'm SO glad I read this. it's great. I agree with everything she says. I love the build up. God I love this so far. I can't wait to read the rest.