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Lucifer's Luncheonette
MSBFail
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
A foot thick steel door that "won't hold that long." That is where you lost me.
Koki Enwai
2008-07-16 . chapter 15
Oh, wow. Definitely creepy. And so well written! I really enjoyed reading this; thanks for posting it!
- Koki
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