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| simpleplan13 2008-07-19 ch 1,  | abuse"The sullen in her eyes are saying," I think, though I might be wrong, that sullen is an adjective and it should be sullenness. "and once again there is invisible wounds."... are I like the piece a lot, your word choices are really wonderful and I love your descriptions of her, very powerful and unique. PS If your bored check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile). |