WOW-so powerful, I love the imagery in this piece!

This is so powerful, intense, and emotional. I can't pick a favourite line, for I'd have to write out the entire poem for you! I did like Judus Iscariot kiss, though. You've done it again, MC. It's a Masterpiece! :D

Isca

My computer messed up. If I end up sending the same review a gazillion times, my apologies...

A very well written poem, with some fantastic lines...

"Relinquish your mouth to mine / In our Judas Iscariot kiss"

"Touch me as night clings to our skin"

"Shimmer of moonlight on sea / Tour the rooms of my captured heart"

And more... The whole piece flows really well. Seems to grow on you through multiple readings (first time I read it, it didn't seem to come together as a whole, but upon reading it again, it appears to actually). Great job!

I love how it flows. It is really good. I love it.

Undrahas